Saturday, April 4, 2020

Sensory Details Essays - Transport, Land Transport, Economy Of Japan

Sensory Details Original sentence: The car landed awkwardly, causing it to roll. New sentence: The small sedan landed sideways with enough momentum to flip it many times over, completely crushing the cabin and likely everything inside. New paragraph: John was on his daily commute to work in his Ford F-350, listening to classical music, jamming out on the interstate when he noticed something out of the ordinary. A tiny white toyota about 50 meters ahead of him began making very strange movements, swerving from side to side and nearly taking out the car in the adjacent lane. This swerving continued for some time, when suddenly the small sedan slammed into the guardrail soaring high above the median and into the opposing lanes. The car landed sideways with enough momentum to flip it many times over, completely crushing the cabin and likely everything inside. John immediately crossed the grassy area between the opposite lanes of the highway to do whatever he could to help, and as he put his truck in park he jumped out and ran to the scene of the crash, crossing over the highway. As he ran he noticed some movement inside what was left of the toyota. A little girl stumbled out of the car, having miraculously survived the wild crash. "H uh...I don't think she has her license." John thought to himself.

No comments:

Post a Comment

Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.